Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Thomas Jefferson! The Man of Many Words! LITERALLY!!

Thomas Jefferson lived from April 13, 1743-1826. Ironically, he died on July 4, 1826, 50 years after the signing of the declaration of independence. In his life time, he wrote the declaration, became a President in 1800, and lived the last part of his life at Monticello. He worked constantly to keep America out of the affairs of the pesky Europeans and the Napoleonic Wars. Although, since the most important part of his life is probably the writing and drafting of the Declaration of Independence, this blog post will feature information about that. Information comes from: http://www.monticello.org/jefferson/biography.html
http://www.historycentral.com/bio/presidents/jefferson.html
as well as some titles and offices from:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_jefferson

Enjoy!


On July 2, 1776, the Continental Congress passed Richard Lee's Declaration of Independence. Franklin later believed that this would day would be celebrated for all time. Well, he was close. Lee's Declaration was the real declaration of Independence, but it didn't have that power that documents have to move the people and possible allies. That's where Jefferson came in.



So, some sort of document was needed that would persuade the colonists to their cause as well as France. Before Lee's declaration was ratified, Congress, knowing that another document would be needed, created a committee to make such a document. Thomas Jefferson became the drafter. But why was he chosen?



Thomas Jefferson certainly had some renown. He was known for his brilliance in writing. You could say that Jefferson was the quiet kid in the corner who was secretly a genius. At the young age of 33, this representative from Virginia now had the task of writing a profound document. Since he was a Virginian...

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Jefferson's "Declaration of Independence" was passed in Congress on July 4, 1776. Why yes, this does have a correlation with our Independence day! Jefferson wrote his document like an attorney. He asserted that all men were created equal and had certain unalienable rights. He continued that Britain violated those rights, so the colonists had a right to secede.



One problem with Jefferson's document that people for many generations were haunted about was the fact that "all men were created equal". This line came to question the use of slaves. Were they men? Were they created equal. Jefferson himself owned many slaves, so obviously he believed that slaves were not considered men.



The Document had a profound impact then and now. The colonists were inspired as well as France! In fact, Lafeyette hung it up in his room. It made such an impact and has become such a monumental and revolutionary document in the history of the World. We should thank Jefferson, for he was the one that helped persuaded France to join our cause. He was the conductor of the train on the railway of independence hat chugga-choo-choo'd on looking for and gaining supporters to land at the station of war. The train had alot of French people on it, so in spite of that, it was still a good train. (hehe Frenchy)




JEFFERSON, WE SALUTE YOU!



16 comments:

Andrew Viegas said...

The Declaration was and is moving to many. good post.

Matthew Riggle said...
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Matthew Riggle said...

Concerning the part about slaves...today in Math Team Brendan brought up a really good point...that maybe Jefferson deliberately wrote "all men" instead of "all white men", because that way blacks could later be worked into the equation. Perhaps the reason Jefferson did not include blacks at first was not necessarily that he didn't believe they weren't men, but, at the time, the pressing concern was "let's unite the country!", not "let's make the South mad so they'll never unite with us!" However, I'm not saying that you're wrong, I only thought it was something interesting to think about...I mean, I have no way of knowing what exactly Jefferson was thinking, and it's a bit too late to ask him I suppose. Anyway, excellent post about one of my favorite US presidents.

(oh, and by the way, the reason I have a deleted comment is because I had many typos in the previous comment and it wouldn't let me edit it...so I just started over...)

Shane said...

Vey nice. I agree- Jefferson was an amazing writer, and it's no wonder he was selected to write the Declaration. Even today, more than 200 years later, his words are still as powerful and moving as the day he wrote them! By the way, he may have avoided noting slaves or women in addition to "all men", in order to avoid controversy with his fellow delegates...

Reine said...

ok this is the second time I am writing a comment on this blog. If it does not work I will NOT try again. Computers annoy me.
Nice joke by the way. Lucky for you it doesn't bother me, becuase, you wanna know why? I am like a trampoline; all of your immature and badly constructed jokes just bounce right off of me into z trash can of bad jokes.
Anyway, this was a good blog post. The Declaration defintely dolled up the entire situation of the American Revolution (that we had all thought to be so much more but really was not all that romantic).

Anna said...

Seriously Reine, this chapter did do a lot of dream-crushing.

Nico, I like your description of Jefferson as the quiet kid in the corner being a secret genius! Also, good idea about Jefferson being the train on which liberty rode in! YAAAAAAAH!

Nico Conforti said...

metaphors ftw!

Matthew Riggle said...

I didn't mean to sound critical of your post Nico, and now I feel bad for bringing it up...so I'm going to post again, and this time I will only say positive things.

I loved the train metaphor, and the funny thing is that I didn't even notice that it was THOMAS the train, as in THOMAS Jefferson, until the second time I read it. I admire Jefferson because he possessed a brilliant mind and talents in many fields, and, like you said, he seemed to be a quiet, unassuming character.

Joseph said...

whitehawk send message from chief greeneagle. greeneagle say funny, funny. greeneagle like confused saluting american. greeneagle say me want train

Maria said...

This was an awesome post, Nico. I especially liked the train metaphor. It's pretty crazy that one document could inspire so much patriotism... Imagine if they chose someone else to write it, someone a little less articulate. (I have been thinking about possible alternate hisory situations since I read Matthews blog and it is starting to hurt my brain) Anyway thanks for posting!

Zac said...

This is a really great post. The train metaphor was good too, well, and it worked, ahem ahem. to follow up on Maria's post, What would have happened if someone else wrote it. I guess it would not have been hung on wall's in France (thats a bummer...) or have been so epic.

Nick! Tourville said...

I liked the train metaphor! Great job by chugga-choo-you. It's crazy to think that so many of America's founding fathers were so young at their shining moment.

Brenna said...

I enjoyed this post! It is interesting to learn more about our founding fathers, as it does not seem like our textbook says alot about them. The Thomas the Tank Engine metaphor is hilarious!

Brent DeS said...

Um... not sure there are many nice things I can say except it was a good effort. I can tell you really tried and I wasn't sure if you were alluding to the fact that you may be the quiet genius in the corner... :O . Ha im just kidding 1-)great job

Hitchhiker007 said...

Imagine if Jefferson were never assigned to this job and only Lee's document was used. What then?! Good work and hahahaha Thomas TTE!

Brendan said...

Thanks for stealing my idea Matthew I thought about using that... Anyway I suppose it is possible that he thought slaves were not human

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